Our feedback from the BBC was overall Positive. They explained how we have gotten a difficult script and they had actually doubted using it as if could be rather offensive. They liked how we have addressed the sex discrimination in a way that does not stereotype certain people. They liked how we looked at aids awareness posters and created our own for the animation. We were critique on camera angles and how we could have more movement and angles to make it more interested. Also the camera angle showing the two characters interacting was not reading well. Things to consider:
- More camera movement
- Perceptive of character interactions
- Perhaps show passage of time to show the character has been waiting to be seen for a long time.
- Consider different ways for the receptionist to ‘Gave in’ to the policy change
- Do not be afraid of offending someone (to an extent)